Question

4．某英文报社正就"我和父母"这一话题展开讨论．假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文给报社投稿，简单介绍一下你的父母，谈谈你和父母之间发生的最难忘的一件事，以及你对这件事的感受．
提示词语：nice，responsible，kind，prepare for，encourage，confident，proud，love
提示问题：●What are your parents like？
●What was the most unforgettable thing between you and your parents？
●How did you feel？
At my school，we are also talking about the relationship between parents and me．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They①encouraged me to be confident and②told me not to③care much about the result．
①encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事
②tell sb not to do sth 让某人不要做某事
③care about在乎
【高分句型二】
And I've learned①that ②confidence is the mother of success．
①that引导的宾语从句，作为learn的宾语．
②confidence is the mother of success．信心是成功之母．

解答 At my school，we are also talking about the relationship between parents and me．I have a happy family．My parents，in my heart，are the most responsible and kindest persons in the world．（我的父母是最负责善良的）
Last year，I was chosen to take part in a speech competition．I felt very nervous．My parents tried hard to help me prepare for it．They encouraged me to be confident and told me not to care much about the result．【高分句型二】They said the process of learning was more meaningful．（一件难忘的事情）
With their help，I did very well that time．And I've learned that confidence is the mother of success．【高分句型二】I love my parents!（我的感受）

点评 对于中学作文的写作，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文．