Question

我们的家乡南京，是一个有山有水的美丽城市。“春日荡桨玄武湖，夏日赏荷三好亭。秋日栖霞看枫叶，冬日钟山访雪梅。”南京的四季分明，每个季节都有它的独特的魅力。请你写一篇短文，内容包括：

我最喜爱的季节，这个季节的特点，以及我喜爱的原因。

在这个季节里，我们可以到南京的哪些地方玩以及可以做的活动。

参考词汇：玄武湖 Xuanwu Lake Park 夫子庙 The Confucius Temple

中山陵 Sun Yat-sen's Mausoleum 梅花山Plum Blossom Hill 栖霞山 Mount Qixia

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I have lived in Nanjing since I was born. I love this city because of the four unique seasons. Among the four seasons, I love summer best. Though it is very hot, sometimes over 38℃, we can enjoy the wandering under the tall and almost 50-year-old trees ,cool breeze from the shade above our head. In Nanjing’summer, it often rains heavily when you cannot bear the heat.

In summer holiday, we can go to many places of interest to have fun. For example, I love to go to Xuanwu Lake Park to go boating on the lake and watch the yellow or red lotuses. If we are lucky enough, we can see fish swim around quickly. When we are tired, we often go to the underground station to enjoy free cool air. At night, we can go to the Confucius Temple to enjoy some Nanjing snacks and colourful lights there. How happy we are to live in Nanjing!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。写作中注意将喜爱南京的原因及一年四季的活动介绍清楚。根据材料可知，本文主要用一般现在时态，第一人称进行叙述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。

【亮点说明】本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：Because of因为；for example例如；go boating去划船；作者并且在写作中多次使用了连接词if，如果，when当……时等，使得本文看起来逻辑清楚，条理分明。所以在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：考查提纲类作文