Question

书面表达(15分)

请你根据下表中所提供的信息以 “Learn to express thanks”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。

背景	1. 认为上中学时吃好穿好是应该的； 2. 走向社会没有感恩意识。
学会感恩	1. 感谢社会提供良好的教育机会； 2. 感谢父母供养自己上学； 3. 感谢老师传授知识； 4. 感谢朋友的支持与鼓励。

参考词汇：enter society进入社会，sense of thanks感恩意识，behavior行为。

要求：1. 短文应包括所提供的所有内容，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2. 演讲稿中不得出现真实的地名或人名及能够透露你个人身份的信息。

3. 词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Good morning, boys and girls!

The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”.

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In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.

Thank you for your listening!

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they don’t show any sense of thanks.

I think this behavior is not correct. As students, we should learn to express thanks. The society offers us a chance to receive good education. And our parents also support us to go to school. Our teachers teach us much knowledge, so we should thank them. We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.

In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.

Thank you for your listening!

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求写一篇演讲稿。写作前先根据给出的提纲，写出有关的短语和固定表达备用。最后串联起来并适当发挥。内容要点主要包括：演讲的背景并告诉大家要学会感恩。

【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。在80词左右的篇幅中，恰当地运用了一些短语和句式，如offer sb. sth，give sb. sth.等。

考点：提纲作文。