Question

世界上有许多种爱，母爱、父爱、师生情、手足情等等。你已是一名中学生了，在十几年的关爱中慢慢长大，母爱的细腻、父爱的含蓄……请你以自己的切身体会，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍一下在你的心目中哪种爱最伟大。

要求：1. 通过一则细小的事情体现……爱的伟大。

2. 表达真实可信，内容连贯正确，语言流畅，文中不得使用真名。

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

There are many kinds of love in the world, such as mother’s love, father’s love, friends’ love and so on. But I think mother’s love is the greatest of all.

When I was young, my mother taught me to walk, speak and think. She took good care of my life. When I grew up little by little, my mother helped me to study well. She tried her best to keep me healthy. She often talked with me like my good friend. I’m lucky to own mother’s love. I wish everyone in the world could own mother’s love!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。主要写Alan Brown的年龄、外貌、性格、爱好以及他的日常活动。全文以一般现在时为主。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如many kinds of，such as，and so on，the greatest of all，took good care of ，grew up ，little by little，tried her best等短语；宾语从句，如 mother’s love is the greatest of all，everyone in the world could own mother’s love，状语从句When I was young， When I grew up little by little。文章整体内容饱满，条理清晰，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文。