Question

6．假如你在第一中学读书．你校准备在"五一"节邀请the Beatles乐队到你学校举行音乐晚会，欢度"五一"节．请你以学校的名义写一个英语海报，告知全校师生．内容包括以下要点：
1、时间：五月一日晚上八点开始；
2、地点：学校音乐厅；
3、对the Beatles乐队略为介绍；
4、座位有限，请事先定位，联系电话：7380540．
要求：根据中文提示，要求语句通顺，书写规范．中文提示要点不要逐条翻译．字数在80左右，开头结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数．
NOTICE
Dear classmates，The Beatles is invited to have a music party in our school music hall on May 1^st
The Beatles from UK is very popuplar in the worlD．It has successfully made several pop songs （such as Love Me Do，Number one hti，andPlease Please Me ） which Chinese students are very interested in．There are no engouh seats for all the teachers and students，so please book your seat ahead．Our telephone is 7380540．The party begins at eight in the evening．Remember to come in time!
No．One Middle School．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇列提纲的一篇海报，要注意海报的格式．内容是学校准备在"五一"节邀请the Beatles乐队举行音乐晚会，欢度"五一"节．通知学生们时间地点，来参加音乐会．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．

写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1、时间：五月一日晚上八点开始；
2、地点：学校音乐厅；
3、对the Beatles乐队略为介绍；
4、座位有限，请事先定位，联系电话：7380540

常用到的重点短语：
have a party举行聚会
be interested in 对…感兴趣
book…ahead提前预定…
in time及时
remember to do sth 记得去做某事
高分句型：
The Beatles is invited to have a music party in our school music hall on May 1^st．
句中is invited 是被动语态，为了突出主语The Beatles．
It has successfully made several pop songs （①such as Love Me Do，Number one hti，andPlease Please Me ）②which Chinese students are very interested in．
①括号中列举，such as 例如…
②定语从句的运用，修饰先行词pop songs．

解答 CONCERT NOTICE
    The Beatles is invited to have a music party in our school music hall on May 1^st．（时间，地点）（高分句型）
The Beatles from UK is very popuplar in the world．It has successfully made several pop songs （such as Love Me Do，Number one hti，andPlease Please Me ） which Chinese students are very interested in．（乐队介绍）（高分句型）There are no engouh seats for all the teachers and students，so please book your seat ahead．（事先定位）Our telephone is 7380540．（电话）The party begins at eight in the evening．Remember to come in time!
No．One Middle School

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，注意海报的格式．意命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．