Question

最近你校校园网上出现了一个英语帖子，意在了解同学们在体育爱好、艺术特长等方面的情况，请你用“李华”这一网名，根据以下三个提示回贴。

提示：(1) What’s your favorite …?

(2) What do you often do in your spare time?

(3) What’s your advice to your teacher or school so that you can improve your skill?

要求：(1) 回帖中须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

(2) 回帖中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

(3) 词数：60～80个。

Li Hua, 11:00 Apr.16

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Answer 1

One possible version:

I like sports and my favorite sport is basketball. Every day I practice basketball with my classmates after school. I also enjoy listening to music but I can’t sing well. I’m afraid to sing in front of people. I hope our school will start a singing club. I’m sure I can make great progress with the help of our teachers. I also hope there will be less homework on weekends. Then I can have more time to do what I’m interested in.

【解析】

试题分析：1.本文应该以第一人称书写，但不能出现真实校名和人名。2.要正确表达每一个要点，不可遗漏，当然也可以适当发挥，但不能脱离主题。3.本文主要使用一般现在时态。4.词数为60-80个。

【亮点说明】文中使用了also、and、but、Then等词，使得前后句子联系紧密，过渡自然。主从复合句I’m sure I can make great progress with the help of our teachers.和Then I can have more time to do what I’m interested in.也使用的很好。

考点：提纲作文。