Question

【题目】书面表达（共1题，计15分）

请根据申请表内容完成90词左右的申请信

Name	Zhaoling	Date of birth	2000年10月20日
Tele. number	0519—82833988	Email	83445133@qq.com
School	No.6 Middle School	Grade	8
Favourite subjects	生物、英语	Interests and hobbies	收集各种动物图片、听音乐
Activities to protect wildlife		去年春天和朋友一起去扎龙自然保护区参加了保护鸟类的活动。
reasons	喜爱大自然，对植物动物感兴趣， 想要更多的了解鸟，人们砍伐树，鸟越来越少，想做些事情来保护鸟
Free time	每周六下午2点到5点

Dear chairperson,

I’d like to join the Birdingwatching Society.

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Yours sincerely,

Zhaoling

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear chairperson,

I’d like to join the Birdwatching Society. First, let me introduce myself. I am a Grade 8 student at No 6 Middle School. I was born on October 20,2000. I am very interested in learning about different birds. My favorite subjects are biology and English. I like collecting pictures of animals and listening to music. Last spring, I attended an activity in Zalong natural reserve with my friends. I think it is important for me to do something to protect the birds. I will be happy if I can become a member of you. I am free on Saturday afternoon from 2 to 5. You can call me at 0519-82833988 or email me at 83445133@qq.com.

Yours Sincerely,

Zhaoling

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们根据表格中给出的信息写一篇申请信。通过审题可以看出，这张表格中有关于赵玲的详细的信息，如姓名、出生年月、爱好、所在学校和班级、最喜欢的科目、参加过的活动，申请的原因等。我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。短文中我们应该把主体放在对自己情况的介绍上，主要使用一般现在时态，第一人称来表达。由于表格中的信息较多，因此写作时，我们要注意信息的处理，进行重新规整，可以将顺序打乱，以使短文的表达有条理，层次清楚。写作时，我们要尽量使用好的短语和句型，使文章在内容完整的基础上，有更强的表现力，表达更加流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，整篇短文内容完整，层次清楚，结构清晰。作者在短文中根据表格中的信息对自己进行了介绍，并解释了自己想要参加观鸟协会的原因交代清楚，符合申请信写作的要求。短文中作者也使用了一些比较好的句型和句式，如I am very interested in learning about different birds.；I like collecting pictures of animals and listening to music.、I think it is important for me to do something to protect the birds.、I will be happy if I can become a member of you.等。这些句型的使用为文章增色不少。