Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是Linda，今年13岁，是某校八年级的学生。你想参加学校组织的“走进敬老院，关爱老年人”志愿者活动。你的性格外向，细心，擅长唱歌，跳舞，下棋，弹吉他等。你认为自己很合适这份志愿者工作。请根据下面的提示给活动组织者（organizer）写一封申请书。

要求：1. 条理清晰，意思连贯 2．80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。)

提示词： Volunteer jobs/the old people’s home/outgoing/careful/ be good at /Sing,/dance ,/play chess/ play the guitar /be good with/ cheer sb. up/......

提示词： Volunteer jobs/the old people’s home/outgoing/careful/ be good at /Sing,/dance ,/play chess/ play the guitar /be good with/ cheer sb. up/......

Dear organizer,

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I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Linda

Answer 1

【答案】Dear organizer,

I’m Linda. I’m thirteen years old and I’m a student in Grade Eight. I’d like to join the volunteer group to work in the old people’s home.

I can sing and dance well. I’m good at playing the guitar and I can also play chess. I can give them a nice guitar show and play chess with them. I’m an outgoing and careful girl. I’m good at looking after others and I’m good with old people . So I think I’ll be good at this job.

I really want to bring joy to the elders and cheer them up . Please let me join you! I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Linda

【解析】

这是一篇材料作文，也是书信作文。仔细阅读提示，理清本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来。动笔前要再次认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

亲爱的组织者，

我是琳达。我十三岁，是八年级的学生。我想加入志愿者小组在老人之家工作。

我会唱歌和跳舞。我擅长弹吉他，也会下棋。我可以给他们一个很好的吉他表演，和他们下棋。我是一个性格外向、细心的女孩。我善于照顾别人，也善于照顾老人。所以我认为我会胜任这份工作的。

我真的想给长辈们带来欢乐，让他们高兴。请让我加入你们吧！我期待你的答复。

你的，

琳达