Question

【题目】近年来广场舞越来越流行。在公园、小区甚至一些空地旁常能看到跳舞的人们。上周, Helping Hands Club进行了一项问卷调查。请你根据调查结果写一篇英语短文，并谈一谈对此事的看法。

赞 成：是健康的生活方式, 跳舞能锻炼身体

可以结交有共同爱好的朋友

人人都有权利(right)在广场和空地等公共场所开展活动

反对： 音乐声音太大，影响附近居民的正常生活

媒体报道噪音扰民引起打架伤人

你的看法： ……

要求：1. 所写内容必须包含以上信息，可适当发挥。

2. 自拟你对广场舞现象的看法，不少于两点。

3. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

4. 语句通顺，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整。

5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years. It is often seen at squares, parks or even open spaces. Last week Helping Hands Club made a survey on square dancing.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years. It is often seen at squares, parks or even open spaces. Last week Helping Hands Club made a survey on square dancing.

Some people thought everyone has the right to have activities in public places. It is a good way totake exercise. What’s more, they can make more friends who share the same hobby. But other people disagreed. They complained that noisy music had a bad effect on people’s study and life though square dancing is a kind of healthy lifestyle. Some newspapers said fights happened between citizens and dancers because of this.

In my opinion, it is necessary to take actions to solve the problem. Dancers should turn down the loudspeakers and should not dance till too late at night. If people can understand each other, we will live in a happy and harmony life.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，谈谈关于广场舞的问题。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多，注意将提示的要点表达清楚，并发表自己的观点。结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，人称问题较为复杂，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，如宾语从句，条件状语从句等。注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

写作亮点：这篇范文中出现一些不错的句式和短语，如Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years.近些年来，广场舞越来越多的受到人们的欢迎；make a survey做了一个调查；强调句式， It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来说怎么样；In my opinion, 我的看法是；以及由if引导的条件状语从句等。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩。