Question

根据下面提示写一篇短文：1）我的朋友Lily是个中学生，我们在同一个班级，她会唱歌，绘画并且擅长数学和英语；2）但是她不会打篮球,游泳,也不会弹吉它；3）我想要帮她打篮球，让她帮我学英语。要求：可适当发挥，语言流畅，语法正确，60字以上。
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Answer 1

Lily is my friend. She is a middle school student, and we are in the same class. She can sing and draw well. She is also good at math and English. But she can’t play basketball or play the guitar. On the contrary, I play basketball well but my English is very poor. So I want to help her to play basketball and she helps me with my English. I think friends should help each other in our lives.

试题分析：这篇作文题目已经给出了比较具体的内容。在写作时，可以按着所给信息来组织文章，不要遗漏写作要点。各个要点之间可以适当的加入一些承上启下的句子，句子之间可使用连词，使文章逻辑更为紧密。写作时一定要注意句子的完整性和表达的准确性，尤其要注意主谓一致。
【亮点说明】这篇作文结构完整，表达准确清晰，要点齐全。文中用到了很多短语和表达方式，例如in the same class在相同班级；be good at擅长于；on the contrary相反的；help sb. to do sth./help sb. with sth.帮助某人某事；each other互相。另外，句中用到了一些连词，如but 但是； so 所以。