Question

【题目】书面表达 (计15分)

以My good friend为题写一篇短文，词数80 左右,条理清晰，语意连贯，字迹工整。

必须包括以下要点：

1、名叫Tom，三年前我就认识了。

2、圆脸、戴着眼镜，个子比我高得多.

3、喜欢说笑,很诚实，能保守秘密，是我的忠实朋友。

4、所有科目中最喜欢法语，觉得学外语其乐无穷，

5、痴迷于DIY。曾经，和我一起装饰我的卧室，把墙涂成蓝色，张贴一些美丽的图画，安装明亮的灯。我们合作得很愉快。

6、长大后想成为一名优秀的设计师（designer）。

Answer 1

【答案】

I have a good friend named Tom. I began to know him three years ago.He has a round face,and always wears glasses.He is much taller than me.He loves to smile.And he is very honest.He can keep secrets for me.He, is my true friend.Of all the subjects ,He likes French best because he thinks it is interesting to learn a foreign language.

He is crazy about DIY. Once, we decorated my bedroom.We painted the wall blue and put up some beautiful pictures.We installed bright lights. We worked very well.He wants to become a good designer when he grows up.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如Of all the subjects ,He likes French best because he thinks it is interesting to learn a foreign language.

He is crazy about DIY.等等。