Question

你叫Suzy，你参加了“小宠物主人俱乐部”，你将要做一个演讲，谈谈你和你的宠物，你的演讲将包含以下内容：

1．自我介绍：Andy，14岁，来自常熟；

2．我家里养了一只猫，懒，喜欢睡在沙发上；还有一只鹦鹉，会重复我说话，我喜欢教它说英语；

3．结束语：我认为宠物……（至少两句）

(70词左右，不包含开头和结尾，不要逐句翻译，可以适当发挥。)

Dear friends,

I'd like to share my experience of keeping pets with you. First let me introduce myself.

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That's all, thank you.

 

Answer 1

Dear friends,

I’d like to share my experience of keeping pets with you. First let me introduce myself.

My name is Andy and I am 14 years old. I am from Changshu. It’s a beautiful city in Jiangsu. I have a cat at home, but it is a lazy cat. It likes sleeping on the sofa. I also have a pet. It is a carrot. It likes to repeat my words, so I often teach it how to speak English. I think it is necessary to have a pet at home. It can bring me a lot of happiness.

That’s all, thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文内容简单，写作难度不大，是一篇描写宠物的作文，而且有三条提示语：1．自我介绍：Andy，14岁，来自常熟；2．我家里养了一只猫，懒，喜欢睡在沙发上；还有一只鹦鹉，会重复我说话，我喜欢教它说英语；3．结束语：我认为宠物……（至少两句）。写作时要紧紧围绕提示语内容，并且有适当发挥。

【亮点说明】这篇作文写得不错，紧紧围绕提示语内容，并且有适当发挥展开的写作。而且在作文中运用了不少好的词汇，share sth. with sb.，be from , like doing sth., It is necessary to do sth. ,a lot of等等，为作文增添了色彩。

考点：提示性作文。