Question

初中毕业在即，相信同学们在英语学习的过程中都会有不同的经历和感受。某英语学习报“特别关注”栏目本期开设的话题是“It is … to learn English”。请你用英语写一篇短文，为该栏目投稿。
要求：
（1）将题目补充完整;             （2）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范;
（3）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名;（4）词数80词左右。
It is           to learn English

Answer 1

I didn’t like English before, because I didn’t thought it was useful if I didn’t go abroad. But a thing changed my opinion.
One day, my uncle bought a DVD player and he didn’t know how to use it, so he asked me for help. When I turned on the player, I found the language was English. I tried my best to follow the instructions with the help of a dictionary, and at last I knew the way of using it. I told my uncle how to use it and he praised me much. I felt very proud.
Ever since I have thought English is very useful in our everyday life. So I decide to learn it well.

试题分析：本文是一篇学习体会，给出一定的汉语提示。给考生发挥的余地 较大。对于考生的综合能力较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的的能力和组织要点的能力。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在自己能力范围内，选择句式要赋予变化，这样才能证明你能更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个整体。最后要注意使用高级词汇与高级句型使文章显得更有档次。因为是海报，故时态用一般现在时较好，注意人称的转换。
【亮点说明】本文用了很常见的短语如go abroad 出国  asked sb for help向某人求助  turn on 打开  try one’s best to 努力做某事 with the help of 在某人帮助下。I told my uncle how to use it and he praised me much这个句子中and连接两个句子，并且时态保持一致。Ever since I have thought English is very useful in our everyday life此句话中用了现在完成时，并且有明显的时间状语Ever since。这篇范文中还出现比较高级词汇如change  instructions praise为文章增色不少。