Question

1.你叫李明，阳光中学八年级学生

2.最喜爱的科目是生物，对各种鸟类植物感兴趣

3.想成为观鸟协会的一员，了解更多鸟类知识

4.做点事保护鸟类，星期日下午2-5点可以参加活动.

Answer 1

Dear Chairperson ,

I would like to join the Bird watching Society.

First, Let me introduce myself. My name is Li Ming. I am a Grade 8 student at Sunshine Middle School. My favourite subject is Biology. I am very interested in learning different kinds of birds, animals and plants. I want to become a member of the Bird watching society and learn more about birds. I want to do something to protect birds. I like birds and plants. I can take part in activities from 2.pm to 5.pm on Sunday afternoon.

I will be very happy if I can become a member of the Bird watching Society. My telephone number is 5558-6930.

yours sincerely,

Liming

【解析】

试题分析:

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