Question

你每天的家庭作业都是什么时间完成的？需要父母的帮忙吗？请你结合上面文章的内容，写一篇短文。内容包括：

1.每天大概花多少时间做作业？2.能不能自觉独立地完成自己的作业？3.你怎样看待家庭作业？

要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，词数在80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

I often spend nearly two hours to do my homework every day.

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If so,we will feel tired and don’t want to do it carefully.

 

Answer 1

I often spend nearly two hours doing my homework every day. To be honest, I really don’t like to do so much homework, but I have to. I know it is good for my study. I can do my homework by myself and often do it carefully, but I don’t do it as soon as I get home. Sometimes I watched TV for too long and didn’t finish my homework on time.Then I had to do it till deep night. I think doing homework is necessary, but it can’t take us too long time.

If so,we will feel tired and don’t want to do it carefully.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，所给提纲要点清晰，要求明确，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文中要注意人称、时态的变化及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文能够根据写作提示，较好地把阅读文章中与写作相关的内容进行归纳，内容覆盖所有要点，语言表达准确，考生有较大的发挥空间；同时灵活使用复杂句式，使文章自然流畅。文章中还使用了一些的常用的句式和短语，如：spend---doing sth、to be honest、be good for、as soon as、on time等，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意总结,牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。