Question

【题目】写作（满分20分）

假如你是张君，上周六晚上你和朋友们在你们镇新开的一家饭店聚会了。这家饭店各方面（服务、饭菜、价格、环境）都很不错，你们也玩得很开心。请你用英语写一封电子邮件把这件开心的事情和你的美国朋友珍妮特（Janet）分享一下。80词左右，可适当发挥。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Janet：

I'm Zhangjun from China， do you remember me? I had a wonderful time with my friends at a new restaurant in town， just so let you know that this place was awesome， high quality of devices， delicious food， fast service， the prices are accpetable as well. We ordered tons of traditional Chinese food， such as hot spot spicy chicken， roasted Beijing Duck， and Mapo tofu. I take the Mapo tofu as my top of the list ，the best Szechwan cusine ever and this restaurant made it rock. After the meal we went to KTV private room and enjoyed the singing pretty much. An hour later we figured out the time seems a bit late for us and its time to leave.Steped out of the restaurant we all yelled "What a day!" I really do want to invite you come with me next time when you are convenience， we should have a lot of fun in here.

sincerely

Zhangjun

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般过去时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用连接词and、so，以及一些固定句型，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。