Question

学校的English Club正以My best friend-为题举行征文活动，请根据下列表格中提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。

我最好的朋友-James
性别：男      年龄 ：13   籍贯：中国扬州   职业 ：学生
外貌	高而强壮，看起来很阳光
品质	友好，乐于助人
爱好	打篮球，看电影
生活 习惯	1、早饭吃面包喝牛奶；午饭吃些肉、蔬菜和米饭；晚饭吃得清淡。 2、每周打篮球三次，因为他认为------。 3、每月去看电影一次，因为------。

要求：1. 要点完整,表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 不必逐句翻译,可适当发挥,但不可出现真实姓名、班级等;
3. 词数: 100个字 左右。
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Answer 1

 My best friend
I have a good friend.He is a boy. His name is James. He is from Yangzhou China. He is also a student.
What is he like? He looks very smart.He is tall and strong.He is very lively.He is friendly to everyone and very glad to help others.
We have the same hobbies,playing basketball and watching movies.We paly basketball three times a week.He think it's good for our health.We go to the cinema once a month.This can make us relax.
In addition,he pay much attention to his diet.Bread and milk is his breakfast and he has some meat, vegetables and rice for lunch. He eat less in the evening.

试题分析：在写作之前，首先要审好题。此题写作内容已给出，自己可以适当发挥。所给内容基本充实。所以主要是要把所给的内容准确无误地用英文表达出来并组合成一篇介绍朋友的短文。此类写作考题要避免逐句翻译。要用自己的构思把所给的内容写出连贯，有层次，完整的一篇文章，这是本题的关键之处。考查语言的组织。
【亮点说明】例文用了四段来描述“我的朋友”。把所给内容系统的归纳成四部分，三方面。第一部分为简单介绍，总起全文。第二部分介绍外貌和品质。第三部分作为共同点来介绍James的爱好，有共同的爱好才能成为好友。同时也描写针对相同爱好而进行的有规律的活动。第四部分讲解James是一个很讲究饮食的人，介绍他的饮食习惯。例文把所给信息从新组合，并用到了一些短语，是文章更有层次感和整体感。