Question

假如你是Sally，因有事外出没时间回校图书馆取一些物品，李刚是你的新同学和邻居，请根据下列信息，给他写一张便条，让他帮你带回家。

Name	Sally Green
Family member	Father:Tony Green Mother:Sue Read
Things（物品） in the library	schoolbag:on the desk
Jacket:on the chair
Watch and key:in the schoolbag
Phone number	151-77980120

Dear Li Gang:                                                                

I’m your new classmate.                                                     

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                              

                                                     Please help me.Thank you. 

                                                                    Sally    

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Li Gang：

     I’m your new classmate . I must go out for something now, but I have some things in the library.Could you help me to get them back? My schoolbag is on the desk ,my watch and key are in the schoolbag .The jacket is on the chair.My father is called Tony Green , his phone number is 151-77980120.If you have any trouble ,you can call him.

     Please help me . Thank you.

                                                                       Sally

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇书信体材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语用第一人称，主语和谓语动词要保持一致。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇文章简单明了，介绍了小便条基本格式。文中使用了大量的介词in on for 等，固定短语go out,help sb (to)do sth, have any trouble 等。在便条在使用了Could you。。。。。。？表示请求的句型，if引导的条件状语从句。使文章的表达更有条理，富有逻辑性。

考点：提纲作文。