Question

书面表达（满分10分）
假如你是Tom，请根据下面表格的内容，写一篇80词左右的文章。

Things that you like		kind		reason
color	blue		Like sea
music	Classical music		quiet
sport	basketball		exciting
movie	Action movie		interesting

 

Answer 1

My name is Tom. I would like to tell something about me. My favorite color is blue, because I like the sea. When I am tired, I often relax on the beach. When I am free, I like listening to the music. My favorite music is classical music, because I think it is quiet. As for sports, I like basketball best. I think basketball is exciting. I play basketball every day, so I am tall and strong. My favorite movie is action movie. I think action movie is interesting. I often go to the movies with my friends on weekends. By the way, what’s your hobby?

试题分析：本书面表达，是根据表格的内容写一篇文章。题目已经给出名字Tom，故应该注意表示时的称谓，人称应该用第一人称书写I。题目要求包括喜欢的颜色、音乐、运动、电影已经原因，故应该用一般现在时。注意一些固定用法，如：I would like，my favourite，I like，because等。
点评：对于自我介绍的书面表达，注意表述的全面性，要尽可能将提示内容表达清晰。注意句子之间的衔接，可以利用一些连词，如and，but等。