Question

19．根据中文提示，写一篇介绍Mary的短文．
要求：1、语言通顺，表达准确
2、80左右单词
要点提示：
1．May是你最好的朋友，你俩从7岁时就认识了．她住的离你家很近．
2．她个子，圆脸，小鼻子，长发，很友好．
3．她很聪明，乐于助人，经常帮助同学做作业，帮老师收发（hand in/out）作业本．大家都喜欢她．
4．她长大后想成为一名医生，帮助那些病人．
My Best Friend
May is my best friend．We began to know each other at7．       ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：
 She often help her classmates to finish their homework．她经常帮助她的同学完成家庭作业．这个句子中含有一个结构"help sb．to do sth．"意思是"帮助某人做某事"
高分句型二：
She is going to be a doctor when she grows up．She wants to help the sick people．长大的时候，她想当医生，她想帮助病人．这个句子含有一个结构"be going to do sth．"意思是"将要做某事"，grow up意思是"长大"是固定短语．

解答 May is my best friend．We began to know each other at7．She lives near me．/Her house is close to mine．
（介绍长相）She is a tall girl．She has a round face with a small nose．She has long hair．She always smiles to people．She is always friendly to us．
She is clever and helpful．【高分句型一】She often help her classmates to finish their homework．She helps her teachers to hand in and out the exercise books．Everyone likes her very much．
【高分句型二】She is going to be a doctor when she grows up．She wants to help the sick people．（当医生的原因）

点评 首先要仔细审题，确定要使用的时态，以及人称，根据要点提示，用地道的语言表述出来，注意要点不能有漏落，这篇文章比较简单，可以采用简单句来写，还要尽量使用一些高级结构，比如时间状语从句，不定式，"help sb．to do sth．"，"be going to do sth．"等等，这样可以提高得分的档次．