Question

19．假定英语课上老师要求间桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误．每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号^，并在其下面写出该增加的词．删除：把多余的词用（/）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词，
2．在答题卡的第六节的题上答题．
3．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
There lived a unhappy king a long time ago．He slept badly．His face was always pale．He often  cries for no reason．This made the queen worrying．One day，a doctor was called^to examine the king．He said to the queen．"Something is wrong in your mind．He needs to wear the shirt of a  happy person to make himself happy．"Then，the palace singers came to the palace and said．"It's true that I'm famous．And I'm not happy because I'm always worried about being followed by the  others．"Finally，a poor man came to the king room．This was what he said"Even^I am neither an  officer nor a famous person，I'm happy，because I have everything I want，I don't want what I can't have．"

Answer 1

分析 全文大意：
很久以前有一位不开心的国王．他睡眠很差．他的脸总是很苍白．他经常无理由地哭泣．这使王后很担心．一天，找来一位医生给国王做检查．他对王后说"他的大脑有问题．"他需要穿一位快乐的人的衬衫让他快乐起来．"后来，宫廷的歌手来到宫殿说"我真的很有名．但是我不开心是因为我总担心被别人跟着．"最后一个穷人来到国王的房间．他说："尽管我既不是一个官员也不是名人，我很高兴，因为我拥有我想要的一切，我不想要我所不能拥有的．"

解答 答案：
There lived a unhappy king a long time ago．He slept badly．
                an   
His face was always pale．He often cries for no reason．This made
                                                     cried
the queen worrying．One day，a doctor was called^to examine the king．
               worried                                                in
He said to the queen．"Something is wrong in your mind．He needs to
                                                                    his
wear the shirt of a happy person to make himself happy．"Then，the
palace singers came to the palace and said．"It's true that I'm famous
           singer
And I'm not happy because I'm always worried about being followed by the others．
But                                                                                                     others
"Finally，a poor man came to the king room．This was what he said"Even^I am 
                                                  king's                                              though
neither an officer nor a famous person，I'm happy，because I have everything
I want，I don't want what I can't have．"
1、a→an              考查不定冠词      根据unhappy是一个以元音音素/?/开头的单词，所以在它前面的不定冠词要用an，故答案为an
2、cries→cried     考查时态      结合上文There lived a unhappy king a long time ago．He slept badly．His face was always pale 可知本篇短文讲述的过去发生的事情故时态为一般过去时，所以应将cries 改为动词过去式 cried．故答案为cried
3、worrying→worried        考查ed形容词和ing形容词         根据make sb+形容词作宾语补足语，根据ing形容词一般修饰物描述客观事物的属性；而ed形容词一般修饰人，形容人的主观感受，在本句中描述的王后的感受，故用ed形容词，故答案为worried．
4、called→called in    考查动词短语        结合上文意思可知是召来一位医生给国王检查，call意为"称呼"，不存在call sb to do sth，call in意为"邀请；召来"即call in sb to do sth"召集某人做某事"故答案为called in
5、your→his              考查物主代词       结合上文的意思可知医生告诉王后国王的大脑有问题，故用形容词性的物主代词his来代指，故答案为his
6、singers→singer        考查名词单复数   结合下文歌手说的话"It's true that I'm famous"的意思"是真的我很有名"可知上文的歌手是一个人故用名词的单数，故答案为singer
7、And→But                考查连词     根据上文表达的意思为"It's true that I'm famous"的意思"是真的，我很有名"以及下文的意思 I'm not happy because I'm always worried about being followed by the others"我不开心是因为我总担心被别人跟着"可推知上下文表达一种转折关系，故用转折连词but，故答案为but
8、the others→others      考查不定代词       根据the others 表示某一范围内除去一部分以后其余的全体；结合句意．"但是我不开心是因为我总担心被别人跟着"是泛指别人，故用others表示除去一部分以后的另一些，但不是剩余的全体．故答案为others
9、king→king's               考查名词所有格        根据Finally，a poor man came to the king room，句中king和room表达一种所有关系，即一个穷人来的国王的房间．故用king的名词所有格形式，故答案为king's
10、Even→Even though    考查连词         根据even意为"甚至、即使"结合I am neither an officer nor a famous person，I'm happy表达的一种转折意思故用even though来引导让步状语从句，意为"尽管，即使"．故答案为Even though

点评 短文改错时先通读全文，弄清原文大意．根据短文大意和上下文逻辑关系，对文章进行逐字逐句的分析，检查句子的结构是否完整，语气是否连贯；再综合运用所学语法知识，分析出句子中的错误