Question

假设你是Mary，你的朋友Rose想从北京到你居住的海滨城市来旅游。下面是一张示意图和你给她发的E-mail（电子邮件），告诉她怎样到你家，并且告诉她每天都能步行去海滨玩请把邮件补充完整。

Dear Rose, 　　I'm very glad you are coming to visit me. Now I will tell you how to get to my 71 After you get off the 72 at the station, you can 73 a number 8 bus to Yingbin Road. The bus stop is near my home. Or you can take a taxi（出租车）if you like. That's much easier. 　　By the way, it's not very far 74 my home to the beach（海滨）. So we can go there 75 every day. I hope you will have a good time here. Write to me soon. 　　 Best wishes, 　　 Mary

 

Answer 1

Dear Rose.

I’m very glad you are coming to visit me. Now I well you how to get to my home. After you get off the train at the station, you can take a number 8 bus to Yingbin Road. The bus stop is near my home. Or you can take a taxi if you like. That’s much easier.

By the way, it’s not very far from my home to the beach. So we can go there on foot every day. I hope you will have a good time here. Write to me soon.

Best wishes,

Mary

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据题目中给出的具体情景，写一封电子邮件。这里有一个示意图，图中告诉我们这封电子邮件的主要内容。从示意图上我们可以看到，Rose做火车从北京来到Mary所在的城市，然后可以乘坐公共汽车去Mary的家。从Mary的家到海边并不远，所以他们可以每天步行去海边玩。我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。在示意图下面有电子邮件的大体内容，我们用适当的词将其补充完整就可以了。空中并不限制词的数量，所以看懂示意图的内容是做题的关键。

【亮点说明】这篇作文是非常优秀的。作者根据题目的要求，和示意图上的内容将这封电子邮件完整的表达了出来。作者对示意图的理解非常精确，表达也很准确，没有语法错误。第一个空表示的是Mary告诉Rose怎样从火车站到Mary的家。在示意图上我们可以明显看到my home这个词；第二个空从示意图上我们可以知道，Rose是坐火车来Mary所在的城市，故这里应该是下火车，get off the train；第三空是表示乘坐公交车的意思，动词是take，表示乘坐；第四个空是表示Mary的家和海边的距离，far from 的意思是离…远；最后一个空根据示意图可知，可以步行去海边，on foot是一个固定的短语。

考点：提纲类作文。