Question

上了九年级后你在生活和学习方面遇到了哪些困难?你是如何处理这些问题的?你今后准备怎么办?请根据以下表格提示写一篇短文谈谈这些方面。开头已给,不记入词数100-120个词左右。

问题	过去	有很多空闲的时间 作业很少 ...
	现在	很忙 不被允许做… ...
解决方法	向...请求帮助 通过…学习
计划	打算…

提示词：used to ,free time, not be allowed to ,ask... for help,
My life has changed a lot since the beginning of Grade Nine.________________________
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Answer 1

My life has changed a lot since the beginning of Grade Nine. I used to have a lot of free time before. I had time to do things that I liked to do, such as playing football with my friends, going to the movie and so on. And I had little homework to do. So I can read many interesting books from which I learned a lot of knowledge out of class. But all these have changed. Now I am so busy that I rarely have time to do other things except doing homework. In order to study well, I am not allowed to go to the movie, or to read novels.
I think I need to turn to my teachers for help. They can give me some useful advice. In the future, I think I should plan my time properly. I must balance the study and my hobbies.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。材料中已经明确了写作的要点，写作时要仔细审题，不能遗漏要点。另外，句子的表达要清晰准确，句子间的逻辑要清楚。这篇作文中会涉及到不同的时间，所以一定要注意时态，谓语动词的变化。
【亮点分析】
整篇文章结构清晰，要点明确，表达通顺流畅。文中使用了很多好的短语和复杂的句式。如：used to过去常常；go to the movie看电影；and so on等等； in order to为了；turn to…for help向某人求助； in the future将来。I had time to do things that I liked to do, such as playing football with my friends, going to the movie and so on.我有时间去做我喜欢的事情，例如和朋友踢足球，看电影等等；that后面引导定语从句。Now I am so busy that I rarely have time to do other things except doing homework.现在我太忙了以至于除了做作业就没有时间做其他事情了。So….that…如此……以至于……,except除了。