Question

4．Please write a passage of basketball in about 90 words according to the following mind map．

Basketball
James Naismith invented basketball．The first basketball game was played on December 21，1981．Basketball became an Olympic event in Berlin in 1936．The NBA games are the most famous in the world and the CBA games are becoming more popular in China．There are two teams in a basketball game．Players on the same team must work together to get the ball into the other team's basket．At the same time，they need to stop the competing team from getting the ball into their own basket．
Basketball is very popular around the world．It is played by 100 million people in over 200 countries．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．以"Basketball"为题，对篮球这一运动项目做介绍．时态为一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．其次考生可从四个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：1． 篮球是由谁发明的；
2． 篮球这项运动的发展过程；
3． 打篮球的方法和规则（篮球比赛中有几个队，队员如果打篮球）  
4． 篮球的受欢迎程度如何（举例说明篮球是如何受欢迎的）
重点短语：
奥运赛事 an Olympic event
最著名the most famous
团结协作work together
另一支球队the other team
同时at the same time
高分句型：
1．The NBA games are the most famous in the world．NBA比赛是世界上最著名的篮球比赛．
the most famous 最著名，形容词最高级
2．Players on the same team must work together to get the ball into the other team's basket．
同一个队里的队员们必须团结协作，把球投入另一支队的篮里面．
 work together to do sth．团结协作做某事
3．It is played by 100 million people in over 200 countries．
200多个国家的一亿人打篮球．
一般现在时的被动语态：主语+am/is/are+动词的过去分词

解答 Basketball
    James Naismith invented basketball（篮球发明人）．The first basketball game was played on December 21，1981．Basketball became an Olympic event in Berlin in 1936．The NBA games are the most famous in the world（高分句型） and the CBA games are becoming more popular in China．（篮球的发展过程）There are two teams in a basketball game．Players on the same team must work together to get the ball into the other team's basket（高分句型）．At the same time，they need to stop the competing team from getting the ball into their own basket（打篮球的方法和规则）．
    Basketball is very popular around the world．It is played by 100 million people in over 200 countries（高分句型）．（篮球的受欢迎程度）

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．写作时，要先确定好时态，再注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．