Question

12．你的快乐源自健康的生活方式，你的成就来自良好的学习习惯．他们在我们每个人的成长过程中起着很重要的作用．请根据下面的思维导图用英语写一篇以"Success Comes from Good Habits"为题目，60 词以上的短文．
注意：短文中不得出现任何与考生本人有关的真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．

Success Comes from Good Habits
                                                                      

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①On the one hand，it is necessary for us our teenagers to have healthy living habits．一方面，对我们来说，有健康的生活习惯是很必要的．On the one hand一方面，it is necessary for sb to do sth对某某来说做某事是有必要的，后面跟to引导的不定式形式．
②In order to have a colorful life，we'd better develop good habits in our life and study．为了有一个丰富多彩的生活，我们最好在生活和学习中养成良好的习惯．In order to 为了，引导一个目的状语从句，had better do sth最好做某事，后面跟动词原形，in our life and study在我们的生活和学习中．

解答 Success Comes from Good Habits
Everyone wants to succeed．How to succeed？I think success comes from good habits．（引出话题）
On the one hand，it is necessary for us our teenagers to have healthy living habits（高分句型）．We had better eat more vegetables and less meat to keep fit．We should eat little junk food．Besides，we can do many after-class activities，such as playing basketball，joining a sports club（好的生活习惯）．On the other hand，it is important to have good learning habits．Reviewing before class，listening carefully in class and finishing our homework on time are all secrets to success．（好的学习习惯）
Good habits not only help us improve our grades，but also help us learn happily and learn well（好习惯带来的益处）．In order to have a colorful life，we'd better develop good habits in our life and study（高分句型）（拥有健康的生活方式的感受）．

点评 本文是一篇图画作文类的写作，解答时考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．当然，写作时尤要注意文章结构的合理，表述的条理性和准确性．