Question

1．My Plan for the Coming School Year
提示：难忘的初中生活即将结束，请以"My Plan for the Coming School Year"为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你初中结束后一学年内的打算．
要求：1．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2．文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
英语试题卷•第7页（共8页）
3．将短文写在答题卡上．写在本试题卷上无效．
My Plan for the Coming School Year
New year school is coming．All things have changed，but one thing have never forgotten，which is studying studying studying．Next term，I will go to the senior school．So I must do well in the entrance exam of senior school．As these reasons，I plan a design for my study．First，I will never waste my time again．You know Franklin said，"Never leave that until tomorrow，which you can do today．"．I will do it as these words of Franklin．
Second，I will ask more questions which is a puzzle for me．Because of these things can let me understand all of knowledge in book very well．
Third，I will do more exercises．Such as，English．maths，Chinese and so on．
In a word，time is important，we should cherish the time．So action is only one thing I can do!．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇以My Plan for the Coming School Year为题目的作文，主要围绕新学年的学习计划展开写作，写作重点就是把计划说清楚，可以利用序数词分条进行列举；作文中要以一般将来时为主．因为是"我的计划"，所以人称应该用第一人称I；作文要有适当发挥，应用词汇和语法结构要正确； 上下文要连贯以及语言要得体．还要注意拼写和标点符号．
所用到的重点词汇及重点短语和句子有：do well in；first，second，third；in a word；the entrance exam of senior school；Never leave that until tomorrow，which you can do today；Such as；cherish等．

解答 参考例文：
My Plan for the Coming School Year
New year school is coming．All things have changed，but one thing have never forgotten，which is studying studying studying．Next term，I will go to the senior school．So I must do well in the entrance exam of senior school．As these reasons，I plan a design for my study．【总起】
Firstly，I will never waste my time again．You know Franklin said，"Never leave that until tomorrow，which you can do today．"．I will do it as these words of Franklin．
Secondly，I will ask more questions which is a puzzle for me．Because of these things can let me understand all of knowledge in book very well．
Thirdly，I will do more exercises．Such as，English．maths，Chinese and so on．【分条列举计划】
In a word，time is important，we should cherish the time．So action is only one thing I can do!【总结全文】

点评 这是一篇提纲类作文．作文前要仔细审题，确定出写作重点；要把握好时态和人称；为使文章更有条理性可以分条列出计划．为避免文章的单调和枯燥．应该考虑运用比较高级的语法形式去让文章增色，如定语从句的使用和名人名言等．所以平时的基础一定要打牢，这样写起文章来才游刃有余，而不是捉襟见肘．