Question

【题目】书面表达

发明改变了我们的生活，带给了我们方便快捷。请结合生活实际，展示部分伟大的发明成果，比如轮子、照相机、灯等，并说明它们在我们生活中的重要性。

要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整，可适当发挥。词数不少于80。

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Answer 1

【答案】We know there have been many great inventions in the world. They have changed the way we live. For example, the first great invention was the wheel. It is still very important today. This made it easier to carry heavy things and to travel long distances. Then many great inventions were made, such as the camera, the light and the radio. These all play a big part in our life today.

I think new inventions will allow us to do things we have never dreamed of before. In a word, more inventions are needed. As students, we should study hard. One day, we will have our own new inventions.

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如in the world，such as，for example，make sth./sb.+adj.，such as，play a part in our life，allow sb. to do，dreamed of，in a word，study hard，our own new inventions等。而We know there have been many great inventions in the world./ I think new inventions will allow us to do things we have never dreamed of before.等多种宾语从句的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。