Question

【题目】书面表达

假设格林(Green) 先生是你班的一位外籍教师，在他回国前夕，学校将为他举行欢送会。请用英文写一篇欢送辞，内容要点如下：

1. 格林先生是澳大利亚人，三年前来到我校教英语；

2. 他与我们相处融洽，但对我们要求严格；

3. 这些年来，…… 我们深表感激；

4. 下星期他将离校回国，祝他一路顺风。

Answer 1

【答案】Ladies and Gentlemen,

First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr. Green is from Australia. He came to teach English in our school three years ago. He is easy to get along with, but he's strict with us. All these years he's worked hard. He's tried his best to make his class lively and interesting. He's helped us a lot in our Englishi studies. We've improved our spoken English with his help. All of us feel grateful to him. Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia. Let's wish him a pleasant journey.

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如Ladies and Gentlemen，first of all，thank you for doing，give me a chance，be from，three years ago，get along with，be strict with，try his best to do，leave for等。而He came to teach English in our school three years ago./He is easy to get along with, but he's strict with us./ We've improved our spoken English with his help./ Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia.等多种时态句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。