Question

根据下表所列内容，写一篇文章介绍你的笔友张平，并根据他的困惑给他提一些建议。要点表达要全，可适当发挥。字数100字左右。

	出生日期	2000年8月23日
基本	星座	Virgo
情况	个性	谦虚，友善，富有创造力。
爱好	酷爱足球，热爱大自然，加入Birdwatching Club两年了
	学习	作业多，想考高分，压力大。
困惑	情感	父母整天忙于工作，不时感到孤独。
	穿白色衣服，因为……
建议	使用黄色文具复习迎考，因为……
多与家人朋友……

Zhang Ping is my pen friend. He_______________________________________________

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Answer 1

Zhang Ping is my pen friend. He was born on August 23, 1997. He is a Virgo. Zhang Ping is a modest person. He’s practical and pays attention to details. He has many hobbies. He is crazy about playing football. He also loves nature. He has been in the Birdwatching Club for 2 years. However, as a Grade 9 student, he has some problems. He has too much homework to do. He feels stressed because he wants to get high marks in exams. What’s more, his parents are busy working all day and have no time for him, so he feels lonely from time to time.

I want to offer Zhang Ping some advice. When he feels stressed , he should wear white, because white can make him feel calm and peaceful. When he study for exams, he can use yellow stationery, because yellow is the colour of wisdom. When he feels lonely, he can have communication with his family or friends and share his worries with them. I hope my advice will be of great value to him.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如He’s practical and pays attention to details He also loves nature. He has been in the Birdwatching Club for 2 years.等，When, What’s more等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。