Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是班长Andy，你们班本周五将要去东郊观鸟，请根据下面的提示写一个口头通知。

地点	东山
时间	周五，7.00 —14.00
活动	观鸟；野餐
注意事项	7点校门口集合，乘大巴前往东山，自带食物； 不乱扔垃圾，不大声喧哗

要求：

1、不要逐句翻译以上要点，可适当发挥。

2、词数：70词左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear classmates,

May I have your attention please? This Friday, we will go birdwatching in East Hill. _________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________

I am sure we will have great fun in East Hill.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear classmates,

May I have your attention please? This Friday, we will go birdwatching in East Hill. We will meet at the school gate at 7.00 in the morning and then go to East Hill by bus. We plan to watch the birds before lunch and then have a picnic for lunch. So please bring some food. We will return at 2.00 in the afternoon.

We should be green birdwatchers. Never drop litter in East Hill, and keep quiet while watching birds.

I am sure we will have great fun in East Hill.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。在写作前首先要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。其次要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。

再次根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。

写作亮点：该文语句流畅，准确表达了题目中的每个要点。还多次使用了连接词and、so等等，都为文章增色不少。