Question

【题目】 Writing. (作文)

Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic “________ is fun ”. (以“_____是快乐的 ”为题写一篇不少于50字的短文， 标点符号不占格)

提示：

生活你经常会做一些你喜欢做的事情，如打球、旅游、看电影、看书、上网等等。请你把标题补充完整，写一件你喜欢的事情，并写明喜欢它的理由（不少于2个理由）。

Answer 1

【答案】

Swimming is fun

Swimming is such a fun thing that I like it very much. Because swimming is a good way to relax and also keep us healthy. When you swim, you can not only keep fit , but also have much fun in the water. Especially in summer, the weather is hot. Swimming is so amazing to enjoy. Try it next time if you have enough time and a pool. At the same time , never forget to keep yourself safe!

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的主题，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，叙事清晰，注意要点要齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有许多实用的表达方式，句式丰富，如原因状语从句、结果状语从句、条件状语从句、时间状语从句等；使用一些有用的表达 a good way to , not only...but also，forget to, at the same time等等。