Question

Writing 13(2011 重庆)

    一家知名外资企业准备与当地政府合作修建一所国际学 校。为了建好、办好学校，该企业总裁Mr.White广泛征求学生意 见，并公开了他的邮箱地址。请你以“周杉”的名义给他写一封 E-mml ,谈谈你的寧尽尽爭申。

内容要点： 

1. 学习环境(如：教室、操场……) ；

2. 特色课程(如：网球、钢琴 ) ；

要求：

1. 词数:80词左右，邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

Dear Mr.White, 

     

                      Sincerely yours,

                         Zhou Shan

Answer 1

Writing 13 [写作提示]

1. 审题:本文是以学生的名义向公司总裁提出建议并且写明理 由，建议学生写作时使用第一人称，基本时态为一般现在时。

2. 确定要点：①希望有一个什么样的学习环境(如：教室、操场 等) ；②希望学校开设哪些学生喜欢的特色课程(如：网球、钢琴等) 。 [参考范文]

Dear Mr.White,

    I'm glad to hear you’ll build an international school,and I'd like to give you some advice. I think the new school should be nice and pleasant. Students need bright classrooms to study in,modem libraries to open up their eyes,large playgrounds to play different kinds of sports on.The school may provide students with some special courses,such as art,tennis or piano lessons.These courses can make students relaxed and encourage them to develop freely.lt would be better for students to have some chances to practice in your company so that they can get some useful experience.

    I hope I can enter the school.

                      Sincerely yours,

                         Zhou Shan