Question

书面表达(10分)

根据所提供的内容，写一篇描述灾害的文章。

3月16日凌晨两点钟，一场大火吞噬了福建省福州市某公寓。大火持续了两小时，烧毁了许多房子。还有两人在火中丧命。失火原因是一家饭店用火不当(the misuse of fire)。

假设你当时亲身经历火灾并幸运逃生，请展开合理想象，描述火灾前后及当时你的所见所闻和感受，词数在120词左右。

Answer 1

A big fire

A big fire hit m．v flat in Fuzhou，Fujian province at 2：00 a．m．on the early morning of March 16th．It was terrible．

I was in my bedroom，sleeping when suddenly I heard a lot of noise．I opened my door and smelt a heavy smoke coming up into my room very soon．I could see nothing but fire in my room!I felt scared and quite nervous—I was trapped in a fire!I screamed for help but suddenly fell to the ground and began to know nothing．When I came back to life，I found I was taken to the open air，on the ground．Some firemen and my parents were beside me．They smiled and said I was lucky．I realized 1 was safe then．

I felt thankful but still a little frightened．And I was very sad when I heard that the big fire lasted for two hours and burned many houses．We lost our homes and two people even lost their lives in the fire．It started only because of the misuse of fire in a restaurant．

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如And I was very sad when I heard that the big fire lasted for two hours and burned many houses．等，when等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

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