Question

9．目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读．请你根据下表写一篇短文，对这种现象进行分析并提出自己的建议．

不重视课外阅读的原因	1．作业任务重； 2．缺少良好的阅读习惯 3．…
课外阅读的益处	1．更多地了解世界； 2．对学习有帮助； 3．…
对学校和同学们的建议	…（至少各一条）

要求：1．词数在100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2．内容必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3．表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
4．不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等．
At present，only a few students do some reading after class．Here are several reasons． Atpresentonlyafewstudentsdosomereadingafterclass．Hereareseveralreasons．
First of all，quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework．Still others haven't formed a habit of reading．They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet．
However，reading has many benefits．Through reading we can learn more about the world．Besides，it can help us study better．Last but not least，reading can make our life more colourful．
Here are my suggestions．For one thing，teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read．For another，it's a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是对许多中学生不重视课外阅读这一现状进行分析并提出建议．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
一、不重视课外阅读的原因1．作业太多2．缺少良好的阅读习惯…
二、课外阅读的好处：1．更多地了解世界2．对学习有帮助…
三、对学校或同学的建议（至少各一点）
常用到的重点短语：
first of all首先
form a habit of…养成…习惯
would rather do sth宁愿做某事
besides另外
last but not least最后也是最重要的
make sb/sth+adj 让…怎么样
For one thing…For another…一方面…另一方面…
【高分句型】
1．①Last but not least，②reading can ③make our life more colourful．
①last but not least最后也是最重要的
②reading动名词作主语
③make sth+adj 让…怎么样
2．①For one thing，teachers ②are supposed to limit the amount of our homework ③so that we can have more time ④to read．
①For one thing…For another…一方面…另一方面…
②be supposed to do sth 应该做某事
③so that引导的目的状语从句，也可以用in order that．
④动词不定式作为目的状语．
3．For another，it's a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other．
it作为形式主语，后面的动词不定式做真正主语．

解答 At present only a few students do some reading after class．Here are several reasons．At present only a few students do some reading after class．Here are several reasons．
First of all，quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework．Still others haven't formed a habit of reading．They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet．（不重视课外阅读的原因）
However，reading has many benefits．Through reading we can learn more about the world．Besides，it can help us study better．Last but not least，reading can make our life more colourful．【高分句型】（课外阅读的好处）
  Here are my suggestions．For one thing，teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read．【高分句型】For another，it's a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other．【高分句型】（对学校或同学的建议）

点评 本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的内容为许多学生不重视课外阅读．分析不重视课外阅读的原因为作业太多，没有读书习惯，时间花在电脑或网络上；同时提出课外阅读的好处为更多地了解世界，学会如何思考，生活更加丰富多彩；同时写上自己给学校或同学们所提出的建议，在写作时应注意符合题意，同时应注意语言的准确性和连贯性．