Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是Tom，请根据下表所提示的内容，写一封推荐信，推荐你的同学Helen获取今年的最佳学生奖。

学习	1. 各门功课成绩好，对令人惊奇的事情了解很多。 2. 最喜欢英语，每天花很多时间练习说英语。
爱好	1. 擅长绘画, 拉小提琴。 2. 养了一只猫，很懒，喜欢睡在她腿上。
品德	1. 乐于助人，经常帮助同学复习功课。 2. 有礼貌，在公共汽车上 …… 3. 热心的，……

要求： 1.条理清楚，语意连贯。2.紧扣主题，适当发挥。3.书写规范，标点正确。正文80字左右。信的开头称呼和结尾落款已经写好，不计入字数。

Dear Sir,

I am writing to recommend Helen for this year’s Best Student Award.

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I think Helen has all the qualities to get the award.

Yours

Tom

注意：所有答案必须写在答题纸上。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

I am writing to recommend Helen for this year’s Best Student Award.

Helen is good at all her subjects and it's amazing that she knows so much. Her favorite subject is English. She spends lots of time practice speaking English every day. She draws well and she does well in playing the violin. She keeps a pet cat. It is very lazy and it likes sleeping on her leg. Helen is ready to help others and she often helps her classmates with their subjects. She is so polite that she often offers her seat to others on the bus. She is very kind and we all love her.

I think Helen has all the qualities to get the award.

Yours

Tom

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求写一封信推荐同学获得今年的最佳学生奖。给出的材料比较全面，首先要做的是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。短文主要用第三人称，一般现在时态进行表达。

写作亮点：本范文内容包含了提纲要求的所有要点，并作了适当的发挥。句子结构正确，语言表达准确。短文紧扣主题，重点空出，中心突出。be good at, so much, lots of, practice doing, do well in, be ready to等等短语及句型结构的准确使用，使得本文生动具体，为本段增色不少。