Question

16．根据提示写一段短文，假如你是魏华，你的好朋友小芳因为一点儿小事与家人争吵，事后她很后悔，想和家人重归于好，但又不知道该怎么做．请你写一封信告诉小芳一些建议．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
First，I think you'd better talk more with your parents about your life and feelings．首先，我认为你最好多跟你的父母谈谈你的生活和感受．
句中"you'd better talk more with your parents about your life and feelings"为宾语从句．句中使用短语有：had better do sth 最好做某事；talk with sb about sth 跟某人谈论某事．
【高分句型二】
The reason why they read your diaries just may be that they want to know more about you．他们读你日记的原因可能仅仅是想更多地了解你．
句中"why they read your diaries"为定语从句，修饰"reason"．that后了跟宾语从句；句中短语有：want to do sth 想做某事．

解答 Dear Xiao Fang，
 I'm sorry to hear that you are in trouble with your parents．As your best friend，I'd like to give you some advice．（开篇点题）First，I think you'd better talk more with your parents about your life and feelings．【高分句型一】You said your parents read your diaries and stopped you from watching TV．The reason why they read your diaries just may be that they want to know more about you．【高分句型二】If you talk with them，they won't worry about you．Then，make sure that you watch TV properly．Don't spend too much time on it，or you'll have less energy to study．Last，why not do your homework as soon as you get home after school and go to bed before nine？（我的建议）I hope what I say can help you．（表达祝福）
Good luck!
 Yours，
Wei Hua．

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