Question

书面表达

2008年5月12日，四川汶川发生了特大地震，数十万人伤亡，数百万人失去了家园，数万孩子失去了校园。在此危难之时，全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾，向灾区人民伸出了援助之手。假设你叫李伟(Li Wei)，请你从学生的角度，以A Letter to the Children in Wenchuan为题，给灾区的孩子写一封英文短信，以表达你的同情、关心、支持与鼓励，让他们尽快从地震的阴霾中走出来。

要点提示：同情　关心　支持　鼓励　祝愿

提示性词语：earthquake, kill, wound(致伤), relatives, destroy, lonely, homeland, loveliest, whole-heartedly(全心全意地)，donate, overcome(克服), confidence, firm will(坚定的意志)，rebuild(重建), pocket money(零花钱)

注意：(1)请尽可能使用所给的提示性词语，但写作不受所给词语的顺序限制．

(2)句式工整，书写规范，语句条理性强，注意标点符号。词数：80个左右。

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One possible version： A Letter to the Children in Wenchuan Dear little friends, 　　May12,2008 was the most terrible day for you, for me and for all the Chinese．The great earthquake killed and wounded your relatives, your teachers and your classmates, and destroyed your houses and schools badly．You felt very sad and our hearts were also broken deeply．However, you are not lonely．The loveliest people, such as the leaders, soldiers, doctors and volunteers, immediately arrived and helped you whole-heartedly．The people all over China are donating money, things or even their blood．I’ve also donated all my pocket money． 　　All these days I’ve been collecting the information from Wenchuan．Sometimes tears on my face while watching, listening or reading． 　　China is a big family．We are all your brothers and sisters．We will do everything to help you rebuild your homeland and make you be out of the endless pains．We are all together with you for ever．I believe you can overcome the difficulties with your confidence and the firm will．Please accept my heartfelt wishes：You’ll be fine in the future． 　　Best wishes to you all! Yours, Li Wei 　　一、评分原则 　　1．本题总分为10分，按四个档次给分，至少包含以下要点：同情、关心、支持、鼓励与祝愿。 　　2．评分时，先根据短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 　　3．文中若出现真实的人名、地名，酌情扣分。 　　4．未按书信格式写作的，扣1分。 　　二、评分标准 　　三、说明 　　1．所给提示性词语不受范围及顺序的限制。 　　2．对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。相同的错误不重复计算。