Question

【题目】书面表达

提示：每个人都会遇到许多人和事，都会或多或少对你产生影响，使你感悟，令你深思。请你结合自己的初中生活和真实感受，以“A good teacher in my eyes”为题写一英语篇短文，词数不少于50-60个。

要求：1.紧扣主题，语言通顺，书写规范，卷面整洁。

2.文中不得到出现真实姓名，校名及地名。

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Answer 1

【答案】

A good teacher in my eyes

I was very lucky to have met many good teachers, among whom the most impressive one is my English teacher. She is a woman of medium height. She is in her thirties. Her name is Nancy.

I regard Nancy as a good teacher for three main reasons. To start with, she spent a lot of her spare time talking with us, helping us with problems in study and personal life. Second, the wonderfully creative lessons she delivered make English learning no longer a hard job but full of fun. I enjoy every minute of her lesson. And third, Nancy's warmly human character creates a bond of friendship that will last forever. Her great sense of humor and encouraging words made us close to each other like friends

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，以“我眼中的好老师”为题写一篇作文。写作时，要注意文章结构的完整性，在写人记事时都要表达清晰，逻辑思维严谨。尤其要主语主谓一致，在使用不同的时态时动词要发生变化。句子之间注意衔接。

写作亮点：章结构完整，表达清晰，用了很多比较复杂的词汇和句子。例如：I was very lucky to have met many good teachers, among whom the most impressive one is my English teacher.我很幸运遇到了很多好老师，其中印象最深的是我的引语老师。 among whom引导是个定语从句，其中又用了形容词最高级。I regard Nancy as a good teacher for three main reasons我把nancy认为是好老师有三个原因；Refard….as….把……认为……。还有spend time doing sth.花时间做……；no…but…不是……而是……；等等。另外文章陈述三个理由，用了To start with；Second；And third使文章结构更清晰明了。