Question

【题目】书面表达

假设联合国教科文组织正在举行“保护地球”英文征文活动，请以“Save the Earth!” 为题写一篇词数80左右的短文。内容要点包括：

现 状	1. 地球变脏、变暖；2. 自然灾害多发；3. 动植物处于危险之中；
原 因	1. 人口越来越多；2. 砍伐森林、杀戮动物；3.……
建 议	1. 保护地球，从我做起；2. 不吃野生动物；3. 植树造林；4.……

注意: 1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名和人名。

Save the earth

Our earth was healthy and beautiful in the past. However,___________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Save the earth

Our earth was healthy and beautiful in the past. However, now it’s getting dirtier and warmer. Natural disasters happen more often than before. Animals and plants are in danger.

Why does all this happen? First, there are more and more people on the earth. Second, people keep cutting down forests and killing animals for their fur or bones. Moreover,……

What can we do to protect the earth? I think everybody can do something to help save the earth. For example, we shouldn’t eat wild animals. We should plant more trees. What’s more, we should encourage people around us to do so.

I hope our earth will become more and more beautiful if we take action to protect it.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。同时针对个人的真实情况与短文的要求进行恰当的事合，更能加强作品的可读性。

写作亮点：本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇；用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，没有或基本没有语言错误；书写工整；字数符合要求。完全达到了预期的写作目的。