Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你交了一个叫Tom的笔友，请你介绍一下他的情况，写一篇50词左右的短文。

提示：1） 他的国籍及年龄2） 他的家庭情况 3） 他的理想工作及理由

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have a pen pal in Canada. His name is Tom， he is 15 years old. Tom is a clever boy， so he can speak three languages. There are four people in his family， they are his parents， his sister and him. Tom’s father is a doctor， he always helps others and he likes his job very much. His mother is a teacher， she teaches math in a middle school and the students all like her. Tom’s parents want him to be a teacher， too. But Tom don’t like it， he don’t like children. He wants to be a policeman. He thinks it’s very exciting and interesting.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达应根据提纲内容介绍笔友的国籍及年龄、家庭情况、理想工作及理由。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，准确运用时态。文章衔接连贯，运用了so，but等连词进行衔接。同时，本文中运用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如He wants to be a policeman. He thinks it’s very exciting and interesting.等。