Question

12．每个人都不可能没有烦恼．当你有烦恼时，请试着控制你的情绪，因为情绪可以影响你生活中的很多方面．所以生活中我们应当相信自己，学会微笑，多与父母、朋友沟通．
请以"learn to smile"为题展开丰富的联想写一篇文章
要求：1．语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60个．
2．文中不得使用真实人名、校名，否则以零分计．None of us will always feel happy．When you are in trouble，try to control your emotions，because your emotions can have effect on many aspects in your life．So we should believe in ourselves，smile at our life and make use of our free time to talk with our parentsand friends．Only in this way can we live happy lives．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①When you are in trouble，try to control your emotions，because your emotions can have effect on many aspects in your life．当你处于困境时，试着控制你的情绪，因为你的情绪会影响你生活的方方面面．这里when引导一个时间状语从句；because引导一个原因状语从句；try to do sth表示试着做某事．
So we should believe in ourselves，smile at our life and make use of our free time to talk with our parents and friends．所以我们应该相信自己，在我们的生活中微笑，利用我们的自由时间与我们的父母和朋友交谈．这里 believe in ourselves表示相信我们自己；talk with sb和某某交谈．

解答 learn to smile
None of us will always feel happy．（引出话题）When you are in trouble，try to control your emotions，because your emotions can have effect on many aspects in your life（高分句型）．（有烦恼时，试着控制情绪）So we should believe in ourselves，smile at our life and make use of our free time to talk with our parents and friends．（高分句型）．Only in this way can we live happy lives．（生活中我们应当相信自己，学会微笑，多与父母、朋友沟通）

点评 写这种要点作文，注意不要逐字逐句翻译，因为写的是自己的烦恼，也要写出你的心情及处理方式．行文注意意思连贯、通顺，注意用地道的英语表达，以简单句为主，适当运用复杂句，还可以用一些句型，象文章最后一句，就是倒装句．