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4．注意：（1）作文词数不少于80词（标题和作文开头已给出，不计入总词数）：
（2）文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名，否则不给分．
目前中学生学习任务重，压力大．而丰富多彩的业余生活，有利于开拓视野，调节身心，提高学习效率．请以"My Spare Time"为题写一篇作文，谈谈你的业余生活，如看书、看电视、玩电脑、做运动、做家务等．
My Spare Time
I am a middle school student．Though I'm busy with my lessons，my spare time is still colorful．
After school I usually play sports．I like basketball and football very much．Sportshelp me to keep healthy and study better．I often do some reading in the evening．I think books are our best friends．They give us much knowledge that we can't learn at school．So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time．Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet．I find it's a good way to relax myself．At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world．At the weekends I often help my parents with the housework．I clean the house，wash clothes and learn to cook．During the summer or winter vacation，I have enough time to do things like volunteering．I help those people who are in need．It's a good experience for me．I enjoy myself in my spare time．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇以My Spare Time为题目的提纲作文，主要围绕业余生活展开写作，写作要点包括：
1．业余生活丰富多彩，总起全文．
2．业余时间喜欢做什么？如何合理安排？①课后：做运动、看书、看电视、玩电脑．（有利于开拓视野，调节身心，提高学习效率．）②周末：做家务（帮助父母，锻炼自己）③假期：参加社会活动等．（积累经验）；
3．总结全文；
作文中要以一般现在时为主．因为是"我的业余时间"，所以人称应该用第一人称I；作文要有适当发挥，应用词汇和语法结构要正确； 上下文要连贯以及语言要得体．还要注意拼写和标点符号．
所用到的重点词汇及重点短语和句子有：
be busy with，after school，play sports，keep healthy，do some reading，in the evening，at school，watch TV，relax oneself，at the same time，open up，help with，in need，enjoy oneself，in my spare time，have time to do sth等．
【高分句型】
1．Sports help me to keep healthy and study better．本句考查了help的用法：help sb do sth帮助某人做某事，后面跟动词原形；keep在这里是保持，保存的意思，后面可以跟形容词表示使某某处于某种状态，keep healthy保持健康．
2．They give us much knowledge that we can't learn at school．本句中考查give的用法：give sb sth给某人某物，后面跟的是双宾语；that we can't learn at school在这里作定语从句修饰名词 knowledge．
3．I find it's a good way to relax myself（高分句型）．在这里find后面的成分是宾语从句，在宾语从句中it作形式主语，而后面to引导的不定式形式作真正的主语．

解答 My Spare Time
I am a middle school student．Though I'm busy with my lessons，my spare time is still colorful．（总起）
After school I usually play sports．I like basketball and football very much．Sports help me to keep healthy and study better．（高分句型）I often do some reading in the evening．I think books are our best friends．They give us much knowledge that we can't learn at school．（高分句型）So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time．Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet．I find it's a good way to relax myself（高分句型）．At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world．At the weekends I often help my parents with the housework．I clean the house，wash clothes and learn to cook．During the summer or winter vacation，I have enough time to do things like volunteering．I help those people who are in need．It's a good experience for me．（分条列举业余生活）
I enjoy myself in my spare time．（总结全文）

点评 解答这种题目时，我们应该仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点． 要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写． 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯． 在平常的学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩．