Question

【题目】2013年，南开中学的张师与等同学创办了破壳峰会（PerkSummit），旨在搭建一个优秀高中生交流平台、拓展中学生视野、让他们发现真自我，进行一次思想上的“破壳”。现在，他们正在面向全国招募200名优秀学生。假设你叫王磊，希望参加明年的破壳峰会，成为其中的一员。请你参考以下要点，写一封自荐信，介绍自己的情况。

参考要点：

1．在校表现（三点）2．爱好、特长（两点）3．性格优势（两点）。

要求：1．100词左右，开关和结尾已给出，不计入总词数.2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

DearSirorMadam,

IlearnedfromthemagazinethatPerkSummitisasummercampforexcellenthighschoolstudents.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

WangLei

Answer 1

【答案】It will be a great honor for me to be a member of the Perk Summit. First of all, let me introduce myself. I am Wang Lei, a student from high School. In my teachers’ eyes, I am an excellent student. That is because I not only always get good grades in the exams, but also do well in school activities. In my classmates’ eyes, I am a good example, so they made me their monitor. I have a lot of hobbies, such as playing basketball and playing some kinds of instruments. In addition, I am good at communicating with others in English, so some students always ask me to help them improve their English. To tell the truth, I am kind, active, helpful and humorous. If I am member of the Perk Summit, I will bring you more happiness.

【解析】

本文要求写一封自荐信，申请加入“破壳峰会”。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。首先，在写作之前要认真阅读要点提示，不要遗漏写作要点，而且要充分发挥。其次，选择正确的人称和时态，本文可选用第一人称和一般现在时态。再次，写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑；也可使用大量所学短语帮助表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。最后，必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。本篇作文的写作亮点是大量使用短语和句型，如do well in, make sb.+名词，a lot of, some kinds of, ask sb. to do, help sb. do, not only….but also及because引导的原因状语从句、if引导的条件句等为文章增色不少。