Question

【题目】 请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。

提示：（1）What did the two boys do?

（2）What’s your advice for the boy on the right?

要求：（1）短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）

参考词汇：dig, keep on (坚持), succeed

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I can see two boys in the picture. The boy on the left _____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】例文：I can see two boys in the picture. The boy on the left kept on digging until he got the water. The boy on the right dug several holes but got nothing. He gave up halfway easily and achieved nothing. How to avoid it? Here is my advice. First, he should set a goal and give his life a sense of direction. Second, he can try his best to come over the difficulties he meets. Besides, it’s important for him to keep on his goals firmly. Only then will he succeed in the end.

【解析】

这是一篇看图作文，描述两个男孩做的事以及应该给右边男孩的建议。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I can see……，The boy on the right dug……，Here is……，it’s important for him to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。