Question

约翰(John)过去学习不太好，父母为此经常生气，他甚至想放弃学习。但在老师和同学们的帮助下，他下决心努力学习。现在他变了很多，各科成绩都很好，并且成了班上的好学生。请以Never give up为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，号召大家不要轻言放弃，要变问题为挑战，勇敢面对。(语句通顺，字迹工整)

                                                                                      

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                      

                                                                                     

                                                                              

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Never give up

    John used to be a bit poor in his study. So his parents were often angry with him. He even wanted to give up . But with the help of his teachers and classmates, he made a decision to study hard. Now John change a lot. He does well in all his subjects, and he has become one of the best students in his class.

    So when we have problems,we should never give up easily. Instead , we should change the problems into challenges and face them bravely.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇开放性作文，并且给出一个话题，并且有部分的文字提示。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，并且句式要赋予变化，同时也在选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成个完整的整体。注意时态用一般现在时较好，注意前后人称保持一致，突出亮点，用好用对句型。

【亮点说明】文中出现一些常见的短语，use to do 过去常常，with the help of 在。。帮助下，make a decision 做出决定，want to do 想要做某事，study hard 努力学习。But with the help of his teachers and classmates, he made a decision to study hard句中不仅仅出现重要的短语，还用to do做目的状语。So when we have problems,we should never give up easily，本句话中出现时间状语从句，还在主句中出现should应该。本文中还出此一此连词如 so ,but ,when ,instead,流畅连接各个句子，逻辑合理。文中还出现一些高级词汇如decision, change ,subjects, easily , bravely，提升文章档次。

考点： 提纲类作文。