Question

写作（15分）

以Tom’s lifestyle为题根据汉语提示，写一篇短文

（要求: 语句通顺，信息完整，无语法错误，不少于80字）

提示：快餐 fast food

1. 我的朋友Tom喜欢玩电脑游戏，他从不锻炼，所以很胖。他喜欢吃快餐和甜食，但是它们对健康不好。现在他需要改变他的生活方式。

2. 他计划每天6:30起床，他在家吃早饭。早饭他吃些牛奶，面包和鸡蛋。

3. 他没有时间回家吃午饭。他在学校吃一碗米饭、一些肉和蔬菜。有时，他吃鱼。

4. 在晚上，他常常和他的父母一起吃晚饭。 饭后他有时去散步。每个星期六下午他和朋友们一起打篮球。现在他很强壮很健康。

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Answer 1

Tom is my friend. Tom likes to play computer games.He never exercises, so she is fat. He likes to eat fast food and sweets, but they are not good for health.Now he needs to change his way of life.

He plans to get up at 6:30 every day, he eats breakfast at home. For breakfast he eats some milk, bread and egg.

He has no time to go home for lunch. He eats a bowl of rice, some meat and vegetables at home. Sometimes, he eats fish.

In the evening, he and his parents often have dinner. Sometimes he goes for a walk after dinner. Every Saturday afternoon he plays basketball with my friends. Now he is very strong and healthy.

【解析】

试题分析：此篇文章叫小作者介绍他的朋友Tom的生活方式，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如He likes to eat fast food and sweets, but they are not good for health.等，but等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理.

考点：考查提纲类作文。