Question

6．假设Susan是你的好朋友，下面是Susan的个人信息，请你根据以下提示，以"My good friend"为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文．
要点提示：

Name	Susan	Age	14	Country	America
Appearance	tall，blue eyes，golden hair
Character	lovely，helpful
Favourite sports	swimming，running
Hobbies	reading，listening to music
Interests	Chinese history and culture

要求：
（1）内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不必逐条翻译；
（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息．

Answer 1

分析 本题是一篇图表作文，要求是假设Susan是你的好朋友，下面是Susan的个人信息，请你根据以下提示，以"My good friend"为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，也就是说文章要以第三人称来写，介绍朋友用一般现在时即可，写作要点要包括：1．个人信息（姓名、年龄、国籍）2．外貌与性格3．爱好及喜爱的运动和学科．在写作时要注意变换句式，切忌一个句式写到底，显得很枯燥，比如表达喜欢做某事时，可以用到She likes doing sth．/Her favorite …is …等句式．

解答 My good friend
  I have a good friend．Her name is Susan．She is 14 years old．She's from America．She's a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair．She likes doing sports，especially swimming and running．She enjoys reading books and listening to
music．What's more，she is very interested in Chinese history and culture．So she often reads books about China．She's lovely and friendly．She gets on well with her friends．She's also helpful．She often helps me learn English．With her help，I made much progress in English．I'm lucky to have such a good friend．

点评 本文是一篇图表作文，介绍自己的好友，这类文章好写，但是很容易流入俗套．因此除了保证写全提供的信息之外，还要注意句式的变换，如表达喜欢的时候，可以用She likes …，Her favorite …is …等等．