Question

【题目】 短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加或一个单词的删除，其他错误为单词的修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出增加的词。删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It's time for stories. Please listen careful. One day，a crow(乌鸦) felt very thirsty. He fly in the forest. He looked at water everywhere. Final, he found a bottle under the tree. But there was not a lot of water in bottle.His beak(鸟嘴) could not reach to it.He tried again and again，but still could not touch the water. When he wanted to giving, an idea came to him.He took a pebble(鹅卵石) and drop it into the bottle. Then him took another and put it in. Gradually，the waters rose and the crow was able to drink the water.

Answer 1

【答案】It's time for stories. Please listen careful, carefully. One day，a crow(乌鸦) felt very thirsty. He fly, flew in the forest. He looked at, for water everywhere. Final, Finally，he found a bottle under the tree. But there was not a lot of water in ∧,the bottle. His beak(鸟嘴) could not reach to it. He tried again and again，but still could not touch the water. When he wanted to giving, give up，an idea came to him. He took a pebble(鹅卵石) and drop, dropped it into the bottle. Then him, he took another and put it in. Gradually，the waters, water rose and the crow was able to drink the(/) water.

【解析】

本文讲述了乌鸦喝水的故事。

（1）listen careful是错误的，因为careful是形容词，而修饰动词listen应使用副词，故将careful改为carefully；（2）fly改为flew，因为是在讲述过去的故事，故使用fly的过去式flew；（3）look at 看···，look for寻找，根据句意将at 改为for；（4）Final,是形容词，最后，它发现树下有一个瓶子。故使用副词Finally，作状语；（5）in∧the bottle特指树下的瓶子，故需加定冠词the；（6）want to do sth想要做某事，是固定用法，故将giving,改为give；（7）drop改为dropped是因为是在叙述过去的事情，故使用过去式；（8）him改为he是因为在句子中作主语，故使用主动语态；（9）waters,改为water,是因为water是不可数名词，没有复数形式；（10）drink water.喝水，不是特指，故去掉the.