Question

【题目】某英语报社以“China Dream, My Dream”为题，开展征文活动，请根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文。

提示：1. 谈谈你的梦想及其理由；(to be, because)

2. 如何才能实现你的梦想；(achieve, work hard)

3. 只要每个人为梦想去努力，中国梦就能实现。(if, realize)

注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3. 词数80左右。文章的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

China Dream, My Dream

Everyone has his own dream. My dream is _________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Everyone has his own dream. My dream is to be a writer when I grow up. Writing has been part of my life. Through writing I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others.

I can achieve my dream by reading widely and working hard at school to learn as much knowledge as possible. At the same time, it’s important to find out the way successful people take so that I can learn from them. I believe that where there is a will, there is a way. And I make up my mind to hold on to my dream till one day it comes true.

One’s personal dream is a part of China dream. As we know, the more people, the more strength. If everyone makes great effort, it will be easier to realize our China dream.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，I can achieve my dream by reading widely and working hard at school to learn as much knowledge as possible, I make up my mind to hold on to my dream till one day it come true.可见该生英语功底扎实。At the same time如等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。