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根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

毕业时刻即将到来，你校英文校刊向初三年级学生征文，题为 “My Best Friend”，以此作为对初中生活的纪念。请你写一篇征文，介绍你初中阶段的好友。内容包括他/她的学习情况、性格特点及爱好。(好友的名字用Mary或Jack代替。)

提示词语：hard-working, be good at, friendly, get on well with, dance, draw, win prizes

My Best Friend

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Answer 1

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解析：

　　One possible version：

　　My Best Friend

　　Mary is my best friend．She is hard-working and interested in all the subjects we learn at school．She is really good at Chinese and English．Mary is very friendly．She is always ready to help others．So she gets on well with her classmates and friends．What’s more, she is outgoing．She enjoys taking part in all kinds of school activities．She enjoys dancing, and she also draws well．She often joins in competitions and has won many prizes．I feel proud of her as her best friend．

　　After this summer vocation, we may go to different schools for further study, but I’m sure that we’ll be good friends forever．

　　书面表达评分标准：

　　第一档：(15～13分)

　　完全符合题目要求，观点正确, 要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。

　　第二档：(12～9分)

　　基本符合题目要求，观点正确, 要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。

　　第三档：(8～5分)

　　部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。

　　第四档：(4～0分)

　　与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑提示词语，所写内容难以理解。